The idea/concept is there. I like the effect and the colour that you use on the visual. There are certain things that can still be improve, such as the details of the illustration (bird, character, trees) and the proportion/angle. Overall it was good, keep it up the good work.
the concept is nice, the pages is colorful and attarctive but if can make the loading pages more colorful istead of just beige color then will be more perfect.
Hi Su.. I'm niki's cousin, jarrold, and yes we nv met before. Anyway, was told to give my 1 cents worth.. here goes.. i'm not too sure what is the theme of ur porject, but i'm guessing it's like the chinese version of fairy tale love story. i like the man with his stick and cow.. i get that very china kampong feel.. it's nice.. add more of those elements in will be nice.. maybe like the food stalls or wells.. i agree with danaken's comment on the details, but if u are going for the fun, happy.. comic idea.. no need so much details.. to me, to much detail make it more serious.. as for the loading page, maybe u can make it as an interactive loading page, have a story there for people to read while it's loading, and since it's a chinese theme, you can have chinese numbers instead? not sure if anything i said made sense or any good.. just came out my mind.. hahahah!!! i hope it helps!! let me know when it's done.. would love to play the games.. looks interesting..
The idea/concept is there. I like the effect and the colour that you use on the visual. There are certain things that can still be improve, such as the details of the illustration (bird, character, trees) and the proportion/angle. Overall it was good, keep it up the good work.
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Hi Su.. I'm niki's cousin, jarrold, and yes we nv met before. Anyway, was told to give my 1 cents worth.. here goes.. i'm not too sure what is the theme of ur porject, but i'm guessing it's like the chinese version of fairy tale love story. i like the man with his stick and cow.. i get that very china kampong feel.. it's nice.. add more of those elements in will be nice.. maybe like the food stalls or wells.. i agree with danaken's comment on the details, but if u are going for the fun, happy.. comic idea.. no need so much details.. to me, to much detail make it more serious.. as for the loading page, maybe u can make it as an interactive loading page, have a story there for people to read while it's loading, and since it's a chinese theme, you can have chinese numbers instead? not sure if anything i said made sense or any good.. just came out my mind.. hahahah!!! i hope it helps!! let me know when it's done.. would love to play the games.. looks interesting..
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